Luke

[pasithea]

Much the same as the first two books but clearly the smart one of the bunch. He changed the order of some stuff to make it flow better and was careful to close a bunch of plot holes and rewrite the olive tree story so it was someone else.

He definitely cribbed from someone else too but I'm going to give him a D- for effort.

I know it'll be the worst grade he's ever gotten and his heart will burn and he'll stalk me but, he should take a lesson from it. A bad grade is character building, and it's better than the other two got.

Comments

[zeeth_kyrah]

Bad grades for the sake of giving bad grades is hardly character building.