More work on WIP

Sorry for spamming with another post. Just not quite sure I'm going in the right direction on this drawing.

Here's where I'm at after fiddling around tonight (with the sketch version for comparison beside it)
( Remember! NSFW! )

Obviously, there's still a lot to be done but.. I don't know I feel like I could be doing _something_ better in this piece but I can't figure out what that something is. Any thoughts?