Persimmon again

[pasithea]

Hrf. Still learning the differences between 10.2 and 10.3. Finally got that pencil test where it'll work on the web and now it's only 200K as well! yay!

http://circle.twu.net/animate/pencil/persimmon_web.mov

So, same as before. Input/opinions appreciated.

Comments

[kibbles.livejournal.com]

I didn't get to see the other one (vrazy weekend) but I was all THATS SO PERSIMMON!~!!!!!!!!!!

[higginsdragon.livejournal.com]

Overall the motion looks great! Very peppy bounce up to front. The only thing I can think of is maybe a bit of a looser squash on the last landing, and maybe try a flick of the tail to the right as if it wants to keep going after Persimmon stops.

[voidheart.livejournal.com]

That was a very smooth movement and transition. And all without using cheap camera-cut tricks =)

VERY nice.

[shatterstripes.livejournal.com]

It could use some more pep in the transition to the final pose. Bam bam bam bam... sllloooowwwwww. Maybe some much more eccentric inbetweens - going from A to C by way of K, not by way of B!

[sambushell.livejournal.com]

Nice.